bluetaro's art Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Pico Day 2021!~]

Nice! I think the idea is really cute, and your art has immense potential to get even better in the future.

The shapes could use some refinement (maybe use a stabiliser while drawing the lines), and you may benefit from learning a little more about clothing physics. Congrats on getting spotted by ninjamuffin :)

AshtonHaz responds:

Lmao I didn't even know ninjamuffin liked this but thanks for the critique tho. I really appreciate it :33c

[Tankmen]

Came running from your Twitter, so glad to see this one here. I love your style. So cool, man.

ZeCyrus responds:

Thank you really much!! :]

[FNF fanart...?]

Ridiculously cute, you've nailed the nighttime lighting. Their expressions and poses are so full of life. Amazing that you managed this on a phone too.
I agree with the other commenter who said that Boyfriend's chin shading is a little weird (maybe could have been a bit subtler), plus it's a bit hard to tell how Pico's head is turned, but it's so cool other than that :D

MariMarilol responds:

OMG tysm!! And yeah I agree, I think Pico's head look weird cuz I forgot to flip the canvas lol, I'll try to improve on that

[Friday Night Funkin Fanart]

Your sense of strong lighting is great! Maybe you could have added a bit of a glow onto the bright parts and some shadows falling on the ground, though :D

DreamsBellArt responds:

Thank you! And I see what you mean!

[Pixel Ena!]

Great work! Earned a Favourite from me <3 I love how the line quality looks like a traditionally inked piece, plus Moony is adorable. Your interpretation of these characters is just great.
However, I wish the actual image was a little more high quality, the fact that it's so blurry makes me a little sad :(

Lehsanha responds:

Awwww thanks a lot!! I should have done it with better quality, pixel art makes me difficult because of that :'3

[Ritual must be done]

So cute, I hope ENA and Boyfriend got a warm welcome x) I love the little details, like how ENA's sweat drop is low-poly, the wear on Captain's armour and the crack in Dad's mask, they add a lot of character to the piece. However the composition looks a bit flat, maybe everyone could be distributed such that they stood in a "circular" shape around the area, it'd probably look more natural than just having everyone piled up there. Nice job overall ^__^

Fianurart responds:

Fuckin' finally, a comment where I get some advice after so many years.

Actually I didn't come to think of it, guess I was limiting myself with the canvas. Composition of characters on a single drawing ain't my thing but the spirit is there x_x

Thank you!

[ENA]

Really cool concept! I love the line style, though I think it'd have fit the overall ENA aesthetic more to either populate the environment with more neutral tones/bright and cool shades, or have made ENA and Moony a brighter colour to make them stand out a bit more. Overall, I really like this! :D

dogmuth-behedog responds:

Thank you so much for the comment, im very bad in shades and lights for now, but im keep going in the practice. :D!!!!